So you’ve made the decision to try your hand at getting published! Please, allow me to offer you simultaneous congratulations and sympathies. This is not an easy business to enter, but it is, at times, immeasurably fun. If you’re reading this, odds are you’ve already cleared an enormous hurdle by making the decision to learn more about how publishing works. I’ll see if I can answer some of the more common questions I’m asked here. I hope it helps!
How much does it cost to get my book published?
Whoa! Slow down there, chief. First off, it costs you nothing to be published by commercial publishers: the non-vanity, non-subsidy, non-self-publishing publishers (more on these here, thanks to SFWA). In fact, you should be getting at least a little money in your pocket from this experience. But you’re getting way ahead of yourself here. First off, once your work is polished to the extreme, you need to find representation. You need a literary agent.
What’s a literary agent?
A literary agent is someone who represents you and your work, who acts as a go-between and uses their business connections to get your manuscript in front of the right editors. Once an editor is interested in making an offer, your agent negotiates on your behalf. Your agent will also vet contracts, get your check to you, handle disputes, and give you insight to potential problems with your writing. They are your personal champion in the publishing world.
Okay, so how do I get one?
First off, you research. Find out who represents authors that you admire, who has made recent sales in your genre. Be sure to check out Agent Query, Writer’s Market, Jeff Herman’s Guide, and Publisher’s Marketplace. You can also seek out advice on writers forums, but there is a lot of misinformation out there, so I recommend you check out Backspace.
Once you have a list of reputable agents (remember: reputable agents charge no fees. For more info on how to spot a scam agent, check out Writer Beware’s list of abusive practices by these…for lack of a better word…people.), you’ll need to write a query letter to send to the agents on your list.
What’s a query letter?
A query letter is a letter of introduction that a writer sends to a literary agent in order to introduce themselves and the book that they’re interested in garnering representation for. You should spend as much time on this as you do on your actual manuscript, because this letter is your foot in the door, and if you screw it up, you might not get an agent’s attention (however, please note that pink paper or that swirly-girly font you’ve been eyeing will only get you the wrong kind of attention). You can always Google for examples of successful query letters, but I’ll post mine here for inspiration. A query letter should be professional, intriguing, and descriptive without being over the top. Here’s mine:
Dear Mr. Agentman,
If you thought eighth grade was tough, try it with fangs and a fear of garlic.
Junior high school really sucks for fourteen-year-old Vladimir Tod, and not in the good slurp-up-the-blood kind of way. A gang of bullies harasses him daily, the principal is dogging his every move, and the girl he really likes prefers his best friend. Oh, and Vlad has to hide the fact that he’s a vampire.
When the one teacher he really connects with mysteriously vanishes, Vlad is determined to find him. But then Vlad finds an unsettling note scribbled across his essay: “I know your secret.”
Vlad must locate his missing teacher, dodge the principal, resist the bullies’ tempting invitations to Bite me!, and get a date for the dance–all before he is exposed for the teen vampire he is.
EIGHTH GRADE BITES is complete at around 39,000 words. It is the first book of a series, THE CHRONICLES OF VLADIMIR TOD. My short fiction appears in Darkmoon Rising, Descending Darkness and is scheduled to appear in two separate issues of Morbid Outlook. I’m also a contributing member of Backspace writers’ organization.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Heather Brewer
Looking at it now, it most definitely has room for improvement, but of the eleven agents I queried with it, nine responded with requests to read (six fulls, three partials), and one wanted an exclusive, so it couldn’t have been that bad (and yeah, the book is now much longer…and Vlad is now thirteen…but you get the point, right?).
Will you write my query letter for me?
Nice try. No.
Okay, so is there any more advice you can give me about query letters?
Absolutely! Use crisp white paper, a new printer cartridge, Times New Roman 12pt font, and always include a SASE (self-addressed stamped envelope) for their reply (as well as your phone number and email address). And be PATIENT! Sometimes it takes three months or more to hear back. Agents are very busy people.
Also, develop a thick skin. You will get rejected–we all do. And whatever you do, don’t fire of a “you’ll be sorry” email. It’ll only hurt you in the end. Remember, professionalism is the key to success.
What happens if an agent requests pages or offers me representation?
You send the pages UNSTAPLED (rubber band is okay) and you send them out right away (but don’t bother to FedEx overnight unless asked, it makes you look like an amateur), along with a polite cover letter reminding them of who you are and what you’re sending. If you get an offer, sit tight, ask questions about how the agent plans to grow your career, what their commission rate is, and take a few days to really think about it before signing on the dotted line. When you feel a hundred percent right in your choice, go for it! (and don’t forget to contact the other agents you’ve queried to let them know you’re already taken)
Is that all I need to know?
Nope, but it’s a good start. In a few weeks, I’ll write a What Happens After I Get an Agent? blog entry. I hope this helped!
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I was just wondering how to make a book popular. I TOTALLY understand what you said but how does it become popular.
@ emily: you must captivate the readers attention to continue to read the story. sooner or later people will recommend it and damn you have yourself a seller!
Cool. Thank you Auntie Heather!
i want to make a book and alredy started and i have no idea what you meant so how ecacttly do you
get published oh and your books are best
Hey Heather,I just love Vlad tod he is one of my favorite chacters in a book(my other favorite is Maximum Ride) And iwass just wondering if you had ever thought that maybe you didn’t want to share your books with people you did know…
Thanks so much,
Yours in Eternety,
Nicole
Dear Miss Heather,
I do believe that I am brand new to the blogging front. Every night since I’ve read the third book of yours, I drempt of scenes of the book as if it were a movie. If the series turns into an actual movie, can you please inform me about character tryouts? Movies should include the little people, not always the spoiled rich actors.
Stay scared, Riven
Im in the middle of writing my own book. It started out as a dream. It was so vivid, i had to write it down… FYI, it is called… Of The Darkness. Just in case it gets published…
I hope it does. I would be so upset. Im spending soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much of my time on it. I let my la teacher read it. She said it was a great start and i should never give up. Word of advice from your sister Luna… Never give up and write down any mysterious dreams. Oh, fyi, Stephanie meyer dreamed about the meadow and edward talking to bella. And auntie dreams of vlad (she said so herself…) Good luck to every writer reading this. 
– Luna
Does no one read this any more? No new comments… I love this page!!! It is so helpful!!!
Auntie Heather,
This is definately very helpful and informative. I’m in the middle of writing a book called Taste No Evil and hope to one day get it published. I hope you give out more advice in the future.
Your Minion In Eternity,
(|\//)
minions forever,
(-\/-)
1. of all AWSOME 2. of all YOUR AWSOME!! 3. OF ALL HOLY **** WTF IS GONNA HAPPEN TO VLAD!!! GAHHH!!!!!!! im dying i neeed to know!!! I EVEN ORDERED 11th grade burns EARLY!!! OKII I AM EXCITED AND if i don’t find a new BOOK too read SOON I’m GOING TO DIE!!! LIKE MY MIND WILL DRIVE ME MAD!!!! and vlad is liek the guy of my damn dreams- i already have that guy but still!!! AND WHY SNOW WHY!!!! I LOVED HERRR she was like so awsome!!!!!!! oki i really need to start reading another book SOO C-YAH!!
Very helpful! I bow to your awesomesauceness Auntie Heather
P.s. If my book gets published I’m thanking you in the dedication page along with Darren Shan and my family! Lol
YAYYSSS!! This page is so helpfull!!!!
Yay!!! Thank you Heather because of you I can write a good and believeable vampire character for my book
I hope you can read it for yourself soon I have about 39 pages done and me 2 friends are helping me edit it and I was wondering if you could email me and give me advice for writing a book…. thks 
First of all, great haley!!! I will so read it!!! And a good idea is to pay attention to any weird, unforgetable dreams… This can help you get ideas!!
Hope you find this helpful,
LUNA
Thanks Auntie Heather!
I really hope you read my book when it gets published. it’s going to be bloody alsome! 
sooo fake, Mac Maschmeyer
I love all the book I’ve read!~ -has only read Tenth Grade Bleeds- All of my friends who have ready the book think it should be made into a movie~ But not the same person who did twilight…. Maybe someone really awesome like Tim Burton~ He’s my hero in all things movies~ And you’re my hero in all things books~ I have a story of my own but it’s a twist off of wonderland. I’ve been writing it for a while. Here’s the first little part thingy, http://demon-tool-777.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Wonderland-143517574 And here’s the first chapter, http://demon-tool-777.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Wonderland-CH-1-Escape-143601954 Hope you like~ ^-^ And tell me if there’s anything wrong with it. -is working on paragraphing-
~Justine D.
This summer my dad is going to help me publish a book, hopefully.
Wolf Change
My heart throbbed. My muscles tensed. My bones crunched. I’m changing, changing into a wolf. I am smarter, stronger, faster and larger than a regular wolf. My teeth clenched and my brows furrowed as new life draws near. My silky, wavy brown and silver hair shortened and went black as night. I grew claws. My teeth scraped against my gums as they grew longer and sharper. My mouth deformed and reformed into a snout. I would soon be a beautiful wolf. I would run with the night stars. Under the cool, glowing, orange, full harvest moon. I would run beside the rushing sparkling galloping stream. I would sing my sing my sweet song toward my sister moon. Ah! Finally the sweet sensational pain is over. I am now a wolf. I’m as beautiful as the blue red pink purple and black roses I grow and experiment with. My fur was black, except for my white paws, my white underbelly, and white ears. One eye was brown, blue and grey. The other was brown green and grey. My snout was long. My teeth were sharp and even. My fur was fluffy and smooth at the same time. My senses were keen and my heart happy and full. I will run with the cool night wind now, it catching my dust. The smell of choke cherries, honeysuckle, fresh hunt, flowers, family, urine and more overwhelming smells filled the air. I am a teenage wolf girl. Sixteen years of age. I was finally free. Free to be me.
dude your books are the best. i made this shirt with all the littles vamp smiley faces and its realy poular. my favorite character is vlad (of course) and i think that if vlad survives the elisian councel, slayer society, and anything or any one thats after him that he should go out with snow (if she will take him back that is.
your in eternity,
(–)
i wrote my name wrong in elisian code sorry (- -)
My keyboard can’t write mine.
Same here, Katie
Katie, that story was beautiful. Do u mind if i post some advice for u and other writers? Id love to help
Just blog the word 
wierd but I come across this blog looking for small other things. Probably that this page has visibility for a word that I’m sure doesn’t seem to be appropriate to the subject you are writing about in your blog
March 13, 2010 at 2:42 pm
Katie, that story was beautiful. Do u mind if i post some advice for u and other writers? Id love to help Just blog the word
i don’t mind
thanks though i wrote it in 6th grade
Anonymous says:
June 10, 2008 at 12:05 am
I wonder what would happen if one crossed a vampire with a dragon.
Your page has helped me considerably.
a dragon is normally reptilian isn’t it and vampires are mammals
Anonymous says:
July 12, 2008 at 11:17 am
I was wondering what your ideas for young writers, around the 14-17 age group, was. I am in the area myself and I am very interested in attempting to get a literary agent; I have been told of the ‘parent okay!’ before doing anything and what not.-But…I am not sure if my age will come as a negative against me, what do you think?
me too no agent please just dad
Anonymous says:
July 12, 2008 at 11:17 am
I was wondering what your ideas for young writers, around the 14-17 age group, was. I am in the area myself and I am very interested in attempting to get a literary agent; I have been told of the ‘parent okay!’ before doing anything and what not.-But…I am not sure if my age will come as a negative against me, what do you think?
me too no agent please just dad
That guy who wrote Eragon was only 15 and look at him now! You can write at any age and it wount matter to anyone, they don’t judge you, they judge the book (in a good way)
YAY!!! I thought that maybe it could make the reader continue to read by adding the detail and that would lead clues to the fact that they are a werewolf. I loved it! so beautiful!! thanku!
LuNa
U ALL ROCK!!!
okay well, i’m in the middle of writing a story.. My Literature teacher is actually helping me and supporting me.. oh and katie, that was awesome!!
thanks for all the tips, Auntie, and everybody else :]
I’m writing a book too. It’s about vampires, of course… (LOL) Well, the vampires haven’t come in yet, but they’re going to be totally AWESOME!!!
They all have silver eyes. OMG, I can’t think of a name for all of the vampires. Any suggestions, please? HELP!!!
Sincerely,
(-)
P.S., my name isn’t really Dusk, in case you were wondering.
My mom won’t let me sleep in a coffin! Curse Her!
(And my Dad!)
I love typing in random things! Vlad Tod is HOT!!!
Thanks Heather now I’m clear. Can’t wait for your next brilliant pieces!
I jus love your books. Me and my friend are writing a book. This blog really helped me out i did not know what to do when we finsh the book and to who to send it to. i can’t wait for your next book.
You prepared a number fine points there. I did a good solid research for this particular issue and found out generally people will definitely agree with your website. Thanks.
your books are da best im writing a story similiar to yours i’ll see if i could send you a copy wen its finished i also feel like im in the books wen i read them me and my friends are making a book club one of my friends have,eighth grade bites, and,ninth grade slays, i have everything but eleventh grade burns i have and my other friend has ,tenth grade bleeds, ur books r genuis i mean it.
Dusk ellis,
I AGREE!!!! vlad is a total hottie!!! u want random??? my thumb hurts
I love your books Heather! Their amazing! I’m so excited about Twelfth Grade Kills, I might explode! Your an amazing author Auntie Heather!
I’m writing a fiction story with a friend, and we need some advice. I’m writing the whole thing out, but its a team effort, and we are going to write our letter to the agents soon, but we have no idea what to write! We’ve read yours so any times, but no ideas come to our minds! Help!
Yours in eternity,
Jessica (-/)
P.S. Vlad is amazingly hot! Great choice for looks on him Auntie Heather!
Hey!I love your books and this has helped me soo much with my book,Dead Girls High!
My death,my hope,my prom,my life.Why?This only happens to me!Only.Sarah.Death by a picture of Jhonson and Ashelie my friends I’ll never see agian.This is olivia’s falt.I hate her.Timera calms me.Becca get’s her Goth cup full of Rc cola,(The dead drink if you didn’t know.)and tells me I’ll be fine
@Dusk try names that might not be real.Like in my writing I used Bosie.Don’t use that though try Gothetta,Legosie,Mahaudinie,or Ashili.They’re great names too!But Gothetta,Ashili(Ashley),Legosie they’ll work.
Dear, HEATHER BREWER I JUST LOVE YOUR BOOKS AND I LOVE THAT YOU ENJOY DANCING UNDER THE MOONLIGHT I LDO THAT TO IM IN LOVE WITH TWO VAMPIRES AND A WEREWOLF EDWARD CULLEN JACOB BLACK FROM THE TWLIGHT SAGA AND ONE OTHER VAMPIRE NAME STEFEN SALVATORE FROM THE VAMPIRE DIRIES AND OF VLADAMIRE TOD TO I DONT KNOW WAY IM IN LOVE WITH THEM EDWARD CULLEN IS THE ONLY VAMPIRE I EVER LOVED LIKE A BOYFRIEND AND I WAS WOUNDERING IF YOU THINK IT IS WERID TO WATCH TH MOON AT NIGHT MY FAMILY THINKS ITS WERED AND I FEEL LIKE EDWARD IS THE ONLY ONE THERE FOR ME AND U AS WELL AND THE ANOTHER THING I WHATED TO ASK IS THE SYBLE ON YOUR BOOK WHAT DOES THAT MEAN I AM SO GLAD I GOT TO TALK TO HEATHER AND I HOPE I CAN TALK TO YU SOON P.S I WELL ALOSE LOVE VAMPIERS AND THAT IS WHO I AM
Like I said I’m working on a book.I’m starting on a book called Killing The Night.Here’s some of it.”Carissa?”,Millie asked.”Carissa are you there?”.Nothing came after Millie asked.Then the pain started again.Millie knew a vampire was there.”Gathen,I know you’re here.”As she said Gathen was there.
Auntie Heather, thanx for writing this little bit of info cuz im over here thinking ‘wat now?’ since im more then done, ready, started another (if another means 8 or 9 more) books, and ready to do somthing to get me rollin 2 the next step. ur recommended sites r highly appreciated especially when im staring at my own book and its screaming ‘do sumthin dummy im fading away!!!’…. u dont even no how crazy i am
but anyway, i L-O-V-E ur books and thanx again 4 the help